Hiwi The Kiwi Writing.

My Hiwi The Kiwi Story.
The sun is rising and the weather is calm, the perfect day to go fishing.We head to the beach with our salt ice and sandwiches. Grandad and I put on our life jackets and set out to sea. We find a spot, cast our lines and wait, and wait, and wait. Finally a bite! We reel it in and measure from the middle of its tail to its nose. Perfect, it's the right size not too big and not too small, it's as big as an I-Pad and as fat as The Hunger Games book.We get a wet towel and put it in the salt ice so we don't damage its protective coating and it will stay fresh for fish and chips tonight. Then we have lunch,  Slater sandwiches with tomato sauce and beetle juice. Yum! For the rest of the day we only catch ones that are too small or too big and we have to put them back so they can grow up and have babies. We head home tired but happy and give the fish to Grandma to cook while Grandad and I go dig up some potatoes for the chips. Then we sit down for tea, fish we caught and potatoes we grew, what could be better?


Two Stars and One Wish.
⭐️The food is described well.
⭐️ I like how the end question leaves you wanting more.
 Wish: You should put what size the fish is.
~ Megan

Musical Instrument Instructions

My instrument produces sound by you blowing into the straw and making sound waves. The pitch carries by the length of the straws so the shortest straw will have the highest pitch.

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